I realize that I haven't posted anything on here for a while and I will write about the reasons for that at a later date - apologies!
For the moment I just want to share with you some work I've been doing recently in relation to my English Coursework.
For our coursework we are required to write a piece of recreative text. This is where you take a stimulus material (it can be a picture, song lyrics, poem, another piece of text, anything) and you have to write a piece of creative writing based on your stimulus material.
Whilst struggling through various poems contained in our 2012 Anthology I discovered a poet I actually liked! Which is unusual for me because I am not one for being soppy or liking the rhyming, musical, lovey type poems! This poet however had a very different style to any I had really read before, he wrote mainly in a contemporary style but his individual views and style of writing added depth to his poetry.
Simon Armitage.
I found several poems I liked by him. The main three being 'Knowing What We Know Now', 'Give' and 'I Say, I Say, I Say'.
'Knowing What We Know Now' (
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kkJh9lIUUPc) is fun and made me laugh but at the same time it also clearly demonstrates that there are some very selfless and also very selfish people in this world. It just amazes me how he can incorporate such a heartfelt message into such a fun piece of writing.
'Give' is the poem I will actually do my coursework with next year - due to the requirement of stimulus being very specific! It is ambiguous, it could be read simply as a ballad, a love poem. But on further analysis it's obvious to see the links it has with homelessness and each line has clever meanings that can be read into in many different ways depending on interpretation.
I may post the poem and my recreative text based on it in the future, or if you want to see it.
'I Say I Say I Say.' Is the poem I'm going to post now, I'm not really going to say anything about it, apart from it is intense and I make no apologies for that. It's real life - as many of you, I'm sure, will be able to relate to.
The poem is as follows:
Anyone here had a go at themselves
for a laugh? Anyone opened their wrists
with a blade in the bath? Those in the dark
at the back, listen hard. Those at the front
in the know, those of us who have, hands up,
let's show that inch of lacerated skin
between the forearm and the fist. Let's tell it
like it is: strong drink, a crimson tidemark
round the tub, a yard of lint, white towels
washed a dozen times, still pink. Tough luck.
A passion then for watches, bangles, cuffs.
A likely story: you were lashed by brambles
picking berries from the woods. Come clean, come good,
repeat with me the punch line 'Just like blood'
when those at the back rush forward to say
how a little love goes a long long long way.
My recreative piece of text is this:
The
chilling blade was a sharp contrast to the boiling water that filled
the bath and seared against my pale, chalky skin. I looked down at
myself in disgust - my mutilated wrists, coated from hand to elbow
with the fading scars that, in many ways, would never fade. Even
those that were now no more than faint white lines, ghosts of my past
demons, they would never fade. Those that no longer needed hiding,
those that could be easily talked away with fabricated stories of my
clumsiness, they will never fade. In my eyes not one of them will
ever truly fade. Each will bring back its own haunting memories, the
memories I just cannot hide from, no matter how hard I try.
My
leg flung forward abruptly and violently kicked the glass that was
balancing on the end of the bath, where it always stands, unmoving.
My rock. Despite knowing it was the anger deep inside of me that
fuelled my movement, the noise of the smashing glass and the spray of
a mixture of scalding bath water and cold, strong alcohol splashing
onto me made me flinch with shock. The freezing blade almost slipped
from my grasp but my hand automatically tightened around it. The
tiniest of breaths escaped my lips as I felt the cool, sharp edge of
the small razor blade scrape a shallow graze across the palm of my
hand.
A
single drop of blood fell. I watched as it, seemingly in slow motion,
descended in a graceful fashion to merge with the hot water. It made
me smile. And my smile made me sick. How wrong am I? How twisted?
I
slowly and carefully lowered the shining blade down onto the edge of
the bath and cupped some of the hot water in my hand, letting it
cascade over my sliced right hand.
I
had thought, a very long time ago, that I would become numb to the
feeling over time, numb to the pain, but as I felt the sting in my
hand I realized yet again how vain that hope had been. After all,
that was the whole point, was it not? Pain. I watched the water, now
tinged with my bright blood, slither down my arm like a menacing
snake to join the main body of bath water.
I
sighed and with my now free hands began to reluctantly unfasten the
bracelets and bangles that hid my wrists from prying eyes. Sleeves
were good too, of course. But after countless times of absentmindedly
rolling my sleeves up and hearing the whispered snide remarks I'd
grown sick of the abuse. From people that should know better as well.
Was the topic of their snide remarks and cruel comments not adequate
proof that I abused myself enough without them doing it for me? Was
it not enough to make them think that maybe a little love would go a
long long long way? Just as a little hate does...
At least the
pretty bracelets distracted slightly from the angry red lines that
crisscrossed in hideous patterns across my skin and at least the
charming bangles offered a welcome change from the not so charming
rest of me.
The
metal of the tantalizing blade was still surprisingly cold as I
scooped it back up off the side of the tub. The tears sprang to my
eyes even before my hand moved the shard of metal anywhere near my
forearm and I screwed my eyes closed tight against the hot, prickly
tears. I felt myself press the cold metal to my skin and I held it
there for a second, contemplating whether I still had the strength to
butcher myself like this. I reminded myself of what this really was,
it was a way to stop the pain. Nothing more.
“Don't
be stupid.” I scolded myself in a voice that was barely more than a
pained whisper before I dug the icy blade deep into my skin.
I
gasped in agony, feeling the warm, sticky blood seep freely from the
wound and trickle down my arm. I could hear it dripping rapidly,
adding volume and colour to the water. I opened my eyes, hot tears
blurring my view. I could still distinctly see the colour of the
water changing from the clear, clean transparent to a bright crimson
as my warm blood infused with the warmer water. I plunged my arm
under the water and closed my eyes tightly again against the intense
searing pain of the laceration in my arm being exposed to the
blistering heat of the liquid.
My
make up, my ironically pointless make up. Carefully applied to make
me someone I'm not, to make me appear to be perfect. I'm not. No one
is. Now however, eventually, my make up reflects who I really am, as
it is washed into a clown-like mess by the tears streaming down my
face. I smiled bitterly.
At
least my tears were no longer tears of self hatred, or anger, or
sadness... They were simply tears of pain. The best kind of tears.
Through
my blurred vision and the fiery pain of my wrist I glared at the pile
of towels, once pearly white. Now, a faded, murky pink colour,
forever stained with my blood. Mocking me - as if the pain, the
suffering, the everlasting scars etched deep into my skin weren't
enough of a reminder. Why didn't I buy red towels? Or black? Anything
but white.
Annoyed
I let the blade out of my grasp and watched it, mesmerised, as it
slowly sank to the bottom of the scarlet liquid in the tub.
Write soon... Peace :):